The Desert

As I approached the desert the gritty sand went down my throat ,I had little water left so I started taking small sips. Suddenly the quicksand grabbed my ankle and pulled me down. I started to panic. A rope was thrown like a jet about to crash land. I climbed up and I was saved!

By no one? Oh well at least I’m out. I walked along until I was pricked by a huge cactus that stung like a scorpion then a million prickles hit me it ,so deadly I nearly fainted!

As quick as a cheetah I picked all of the prickles off and lay on the ground. I felt like an extinguished flame of a volcano.

By Hyunsoo, Alan, Richard and Dylan